Assessment:

Plot/Idea: The story of the conflict between the Long Fang Band, headed by Chebi, and the First Sons of Man, headed by Chamo, is compelling, with ample details of prehistoric conditions—both of the complexities of surviving and thriving as a group, the melding of cultures, and the perils of intergroup struggles for territory and dominance. The novel's climax is well-grounded in the characters' personal clashes against the larger story of early human development.

Prose: Long Fang Band's biggest challenge is in the amount of exposition required to illuminate its prehistoric world. From details on hunting patterns to cave dwellings to other minutiae of daily life, Root delivers interesting particulars to bring the setting to life, though the sheer volume of information impedes narrative flow at times. The story's descriptions are rich, and Root reaches a nice balance of penetrating and florid prose.

Originality: This is a timely view into primitive humanity, and, in light of recent discoveries of early Neanderthal/Homo Sapiens interaction, it provides a heart-driven perspective of our historical origins.

Character/Execution: The character development shines, with beautifully drawn portraits of complex relationships, both familial and tribal. Main characters, particularly Chebi, Una, Amo, and Chamo, become fully realized, characterized by dynamic emotions and intricate interplay.

Date Submitted: August 20, 2024