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  • 03/2012
  • B007OAGQLQ
  • 354 pages
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Rochelle Wilcox
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Lost Long (The Road to Ragnarök Book 1)
Some Norse gods will do anything to stop humans from knowing that gods still exist. They'll kill anyone who discovers their secret. But the god of love Freyr won't let them have Lia. She doesn't want to go with him. He doesn't want to take her. And he definitely doesn't want to fall in love with her. Fate has other plans. When Lia witnesses the impossible in the sky above her on a dark Los Angeles morning, Loki and Thor condemn her to death. To save her life, Freyr, his sister Freyja, and her husband Will must take Lia to the other side of the world, into the realm of giants and dragons far below, and finally to the mythical land of Asgard. Along the way, as Freyr discovers a love he never expected, he's forced to decide how far he will go to protect Lia from the fight his brothers started, and he will end.
Plot/Idea: 7 out of 10
Originality: 6 out of 10
Prose: 7 out of 10
Character/Execution: 7 out of 10
Overall: 6.75 out of 10

Assessment:

Plot/Idea: Lost Long is an adventure/fantasy thriller that uses Norse mythology (including familiar characters like Odin, Thor, and Loki), to frame a modern quest/love story. When Lia accidentally witnesses a battle between two gods, he life becomes forfeit--however, one of the gods--Freyr, the Norse God of love--has sworn to protect humanity and is determined to keep her safe. What follows is an epic adventure as Freyr, sister Freya,(human) husband Will, and Lia must race their enemies to Asgard. Along the way, Lia and Freyr must also confront their love for each other and weigh the sacrifices of their choices.

Prose: Overall, Wilcox's prose is detailed, fast-paced, and easy to read, and Lost Long does a good job of worldbuilding for future modern/ Norse mythological adventures.

Originality: Mythological figures in a modern setting, a fantastical quest, an unlikely love story--none of the above are overly original. However, despite this, Wilcox does succeed in crafting a fun to read, imaginative tale; and she clearly has a passion for Norse mythology that shines through on every page.

Character/Execution: Overall, the characters are well-executed and developed, and, despite the familiarity of some characters, Freyr and Freya add interest and dimension. Unfortunately, Lia is only seen through the lovesick eyes of Freyr, so she sometimes reads as flat--however as this is Book 1, all of the main characters are adequately developed as an intro to the world/plot.

Date Submitted: August 23, 2023

Formats
Kindle Edition Digital Ebook Purchas Details
  • 03/2012
  • B007OAGQLQ
  • 354 pages
  • $3.99
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