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Nala Henkel-Aislinn
Author
Pancakes & Handguns
Professional smart ass and IT Administrator, Lena Kozek, has just caught her sleazy boss in a sleazy act, and it’s finally pushed her to enact her very illegal but enormously satisfying digital revenge. Clever smart ass that she is, she doesn’t realize she’s being spied on. FBI agent, Thomas Palmer (distractingly sexy in a Christian-Bale-as-Batman way) confronts Lena with the evidence of her felony. But he offers her a choice. Go back home and infiltrate her hometown’s crime family or go to jail. The problem? She’s wiped all knowledge of her childhood from her memory, especially any knowledge of a crime family. Given a night to consider the two crappy options, she gets various opinions. The strongest is from her dead, disapproving father who shows up in all his skeletal glory. He was a hitman for the crime family and knows them well. His advice? “Choose jail.” Despite the off-putting vision of his corpse, she chooses home, and so unfolds a complex zharkoye* of confrontations that include old family secrets, new found-family relationships, and one awkward-but-sweet hook-up with dorky, jaded cop, Quinn Magee. The whole mess boils over when the crime family boss ends up dead. Identified by a witness, Lena will be shoved into the harsh spotlight of Quinn, her dorky hook-up who’s investigating the murder. Culminating at a Ukrainian picnic, she’ll be faced with a serious decision. Will she choose her blood family over a crime family, or just go back for seconds of varenyky?
Plot/Idea: 8 out of 10
Originality: 8 out of 10
Prose: 9 out of 10
Character/Execution: 9 out of 10
Overall: 8.50 out of 10

Assessment:

Plot/Idea: The characters serve as the vehicle for Henkel-Aislinn's plot in this lively novel. The central mystery resolves in a satisfying manner, and Henkel-Aislinn is a skillful storyteller who creates thoughtful personalities rich with both charm and playful banter.

Prose: Henkel-Aislinn's polished writing is entertaining and smart, and their skill at using character's thoughts and actions adds appeal to the plot—and will keep readers invested from the start.

Originality: The idea of a cozy mystery transformed into a series is enjoyable, and Pancakes & Handguns has a charming feel that highlights character interiority as much as the primary mystery.

Character/Execution: Sarcastic and witty, main character Lena Kozek develops quickly, her thoughts organically revealed as the action unfolds. Her determination is impressive, and Henkel-Aislinn's portrayal of secondary characters is consistent and steady.

Date Submitted: May 31, 2024

News
08/01/2024
Pancakes & Handguns receives 5-star review

Nala Henkel-Aislinn’s "Pancakes & Handguns" kept me up late into the night. You could categorize it as a mystery with elements of thriller and romance and served with a splash of humor.

Henkel-Aislinn drew me into the story with an action-filled scene in the first chapter, building my curiosity to know who the characters were. The pacing is brisk, but as you read, you realize that there are multiple subplots within one story. Using an engaging and witty conversational tone and told from the multiple perspectives of Lena, Quinn, and Thomas, the narrative allowed us to understand the characters better.

Although Lena, Thomas, and Quinn drive the narrative and their characters are well-defined, the supporting characters also have their unique personalities. Damon the bus driver and Valerie, Lena’s cousin Vas’s girlfriend, were my top favorites. If you like fast-paced mysteries with characters who are likely to do the unexpected, "Pancakes & Handguns" should be on your list.

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