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Frank Dravis
Author
The Citadel
Frank Dravis, author

The Citadel unfolds on the protected planet of Dianis, a Middle Age world, where Achelous—the   architect and orchestrator of the planet’s defense against extrasolars—has been abducted by the Paleowrights, a powerful religious order. Chained, tortured, and taken to the Empire of Nak Drakas, Achelous’s fate remains unknown.

Marisa, Achelous’s lover and a trader princess, embarks on a daring mission of restitution. To rescue Achelous, she must infiltrate the heart of her enemy—the Drakan Empire—and save him from Viscount Helprig. The Paleowright clergyman seeks Achelous’s execution, not for what he knows, but for blasphemy against the Paleowright's faith.

However, the commandant of the Drakan secret service is not so quick to condemn. He suspects Achelous is an Avarian, an agent of a galactic federation, the very people the Paleowrights revere as gods.

As corsairs raid the planet and Paleowrights conspire, Marisa races against time. Her success could trigger a global war, but can one man’s knowledge be worth such consequences? The answer lies in what he knows.

Plot/Idea: 7 out of 10
Originality: 6 out of 10
Prose: 7 out of 10
Character/Execution: 7 out of 10
Overall: 6.75 out of 10

Assessment:

Plot/Idea: The Citadel is a tense and exciting sci-fi fantasy with a striking cast and intriguing plot. The novel centers on Achelous's kidnapping and the subsequent crusade to rescue him, unfolding in an engrossing and edgy storyline.

Prose: Dravis adorns his text with gripping world building and a glut of dramatic tension. His detailed and succinct use of language and well-rounded characters add a vibrant, effervescent energy to the novel, making it an infectious and immensely satisfying experience.

Originality: The Citadel is a confidently written fantasy novel with an accessible and likeable story, driven by sharply observed characters. Dravis's crisp writing is evident in the text's persistent, rollicking rhythm, a strength of the novel that maintains interest throughout.

Character/Execution: The Citadel's dense and colorful cast includes the abducted Achelous and his mistress, the courageous Princess Marisa. The characters' sharp and dynamic dialogue gives the narrative emotional depth and authenticity.

Blurb: A riveting fantasy novel with sharp, well-crafted characters.

Date Submitted: June 09, 2024

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