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Dr. Bill Senyard
Author
The Garden Tale

"It’s Gone!” said Hui Fen. “The castle, the elite royal guard, and even the king—all gone. I don’t mean they are no more. I didn’t find any evidence of them ever existing.” 

A hand-picked royal team must embark on a perilous mission to counter a devious social media attack that has severely undermined the great king's authority in Garden City. In this thrilling third installment of the award-winning Kingdom Quest Trilogy, young readers will follow the elite team as they face a kingdom where the citizens believe their king no longer exists. Can they restore the monarchy and rekindle hope in the realm? Who's behind it all?

Remember, not all quests are alike…and this King is definitely not what he appears.

Reviews
The spirited third entry in Senyard’s Kingdom Quest Trilogy, which blends rousing allegorical fantasy involving quests and pirates and beasts with a satiric sense of play, wastes no time getting to the action. The king is gone but not just missing—his very existence has been erased in a devastating blitz. Citizens Jeremy, Hui, and Anelé, along with former pirate Captain Ben Porat, answer the call from the Royal Commander and are tasked with finding the king and restoring the kingdom. The team instantly has their hands full fending off attacks both virtual and real-world. Worse, there’s no margin for error; their failure will doom the kingdom. And in a land of dwarves, knights, and dragons, it’s amusing to see characters referencing Sam Spade, dialogue like “big yikes”, “glow-up,” and a villainous tech company that sells “Instant Gratification devices” (the new IG16 is coming soon!) and insists that its business model doesn’t involve slavery, just “IHM,” or ”Involuntary Human Migration.”

Senyard’s dialogue is vivid and funny, his wisecracking “Storyteller’s Note”s smash the fourth wall with on-point quips, while his descriptions of the fantastical (trolls, dwarves, a gorgon whose “bulbous eyes glint with malice from a skull adorned with constantly writhing snakes”) burst with exciting energy. Some info dumps are distracting—one storyteller’s note acknowledges this, carping “Whew, that’s a mouthful!”—and at times the asides prove cutesy, undercutting the narrative stakes.

Still, there’s much cleverness and pointed parody of our online lives as Jeremy, Hui, Anelé, and a reformed pirate captain put their formidable abilities and cleverness to heroic use and act in concert, a good trick since they are often apart. Senyard makes the heros’ growing understanding of the dangers of constant online connection and performance a key story element—the novel makes a compelling case through its tale. It’s an intriguing journey, with laughs, food for thought, and a spirit of adventure.

Takeaway: Fast, funny fantasy of trolls, dwarves, a missing king, and social media.

Comparable Titles: Laurie Woodward’s Forest Secrets, Barbara Ferrier’s Forbidden Magic.

Production grades
Cover: A-
Design and typography: A
Illustrations: N/A
Editing: A-
Marketing copy: A-

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