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  • Rekindled Love

    by Lars Bjerregaard Jessen

    Rating: 7.00

    Plot/Idea: Rekindled Love is a wistful novel that reflects on first love and how powerful memories color the present. The novel offers an intriguing setup as the author juxtaposes the protagonist's recollections with his children's underwater explorations. 

    Prose: The prose is clear and straightforward, if occasionally bland. The carefully detailed descriptions of Anders's everyday life lose their interest when accompanied with very little plot-propelling action.

    Originality: Bjerregaard Jessen does an admirable job of blending the present day events with the protagonist's past, though the character development comes across as secondary to the novel's unique conceptual framework.

    Character/Execution: While the focus on a man reflecting on a youthful love affair is potentially intriguing, the ordinariness of Anders's relationship with Cecilie weighs down this story. What's missing is a real spark of interest about their relationship.

  • Long Fang Band

    by Keith Root

    Rating: 7.00

    Plot/Idea: The story of the conflict between the Long Fang Band, headed by Chebi, and the First Sons of Man, headed by Chamo, is compelling, with ample details of prehistoric conditions—both of the complexities of surviving and thriving as a group, the melding of cultures, and the perils of intergroup struggles for territory and dominance. The novel's climax is well-grounded in the characters' personal clashes against the larger story of early human development.

    Prose: Long Fang Band's biggest challenge is in the amount of exposition required to illuminate its prehistoric world. From details on hunting patterns to cave dwellings to other minutiae of daily life, Root delivers interesting particulars to bring the setting to life, though the sheer volume of information impedes narrative flow at times. The story's descriptions are rich, and Root reaches a nice balance of penetrating and florid prose.

    Originality: This is a timely view into primitive humanity, and, in light of recent discoveries of early Neanderthal/Homo Sapiens interaction, it provides a heart-driven perspective of our historical origins.

    Character/Execution: The character development shines, with beautifully drawn portraits of complex relationships, both familial and tribal. Main characters, particularly Chebi, Una, Amo, and Chamo, become fully realized, characterized by dynamic emotions and intricate interplay.

  • Ex-Mas Song

    by Jeffrey Cummins

    Rating: 7.00

    Plot/Idea: Cummins adds a new twist to Charles Dickens's A Christmas Carol in this lighthearted take on mental health in contemporary times. The plot takes off in multiple directions and veers firmly away from the original story, as main character Justin discovers he's died from a suicide attempt—and must embark on a journey of self-discovery to be able to truly live again.

    Prose: The prose tends to be verbose at times, which distracts from the plot, but the descriptions are lively and the setting feels authentic.

    Originality: Ex-Mas Song deviates from A Christmas Carol in many ways, as Cummins spins it to be a modern tale of addiction, trauma, and recovery.

    Character/Execution: Justin experiences a fair amount of growth as he works through his suicide attempt and tries to move forward, and Cummins places a big emphasis on faith throughout his odyssey. Justin's on again, off again ex-wife Blair shows less development, transforming into more of a caricature as the novel progresses. 

  • She Seeks Herself

    by Mark Pifer

    Rating: 7.00

    Plot/Idea: She Seeks Herself interlaces strings of past lives together to explore meaning and purpose, starting with an enigmatic tale of The Goddess assuming the form of a spider as a method of self-discovery. The plot is imposing, multilayered, and sometimes unclear, but Pifer draws out deeper meaning that will provoke thought in readers. 

    Prose: Pifer's prose flows smoothly, heavy with rich descriptions that will help readers generate their own reflections on life, hope, and community.

    Originality: The originality in Pifer's thoughtful book lies in its portrayal of an enmeshed web of lives—all interconnected through one soul—that illustrates humanity's varied, yet communal, experiences.  

    Character/Execution: Pifer offers a range of characters for readers to connect with, each with their own stark experiences—some of which may be challenging to read, such as the enslaved Abigail, who is forced to endure continuous assaults throughout her short story. The cast is extensive, but readers will have opportunities to empathize with each character—and relate to their experiences on a broad, human level.

  • Plot/Idea: A Good Day is a witty collection of 36 short stories dealing with topics ranging from the everyday to the more surreal. Guiasu's vignettes are sharp and convincing, with a fair amount of honest and thought-provoking personal observations.

    Prose: Guiasu's text is confidently written and his everyday observations are rendered in a clear, concise, and often satirical manner. The short stories are simple, effective, easy to read, and benefit from a likable and engaging writing style.

    Originality: A Good Day is a humorous collection of short stories largely focused on education and academic matters. Ideal for dipping in and out of on a whim, Guiasu's consistently witty and wry sense of humor is endearing and enjoyable.

    Character/Execution: The variety of characters contained in this collection of short stories are vividly realized and relatable. Guiasu's charisma shines through in many of these tales, and his observations on life at educational establishments in particular is impressively realized.

  • HOMEbound: Book 1

    by Toby Adkins

    Rating: 7.00

    Plot/Idea: Homebound is an enjoyable suspense thriller with well devised central characters and a tense and gripping plot. Packed with relentless dramatic tension, Adkins's storyline is consistently intriguing and maintains the reader's interest throughout.

    Prose: Adkins's text is assured and confidently written, building tension effortlessly with sharp and dynamic rhythmic sentences . The attention to detail is extremely convincing, brilliantly helping to augment the level of suspense and impending doom.

    Originality: Homebound is a straightforward suspense thriller that is well presented and easy to read. Written with confidence and gusto, Adkins's text remains compelling even if the plot development is at times obvious.

    Character/Execution: Written from the perspective of the two main protagonists, father and daughter combo Rob and Ann, the text benefits from exposing these two contrasting viewpoints. Adkins also writes a fine supporting cast of characters who add an element of depth and dynamism to the story.

  • Plot/Idea: Reed’s historical tale begins with a hurried escape from an alcoholic father for teenage sisters Martha and Helen, bound from their home in Poland to the call of freedom on Ellis Island. From there, Reed takes readers on a transformative journey through hardship, determination, and family secrets, centered on Helen’s son, Wally, and his life growing up as the child of immigrants in Chicago. Reed ties numerous stories into Wally’s arc, and the perspective jumps at times become dizzying.

    Prose: The prose is efficient and educational, though Reed’s more formal style leads to stilted dialogue in several places.

    Originality: Whispers in a Phone Booth delivers as much history as it does plot, gifting readers with a glimpse of 20th century life from the perspective of multiple nations and people—a choice that, though informative, detracts from the story’s excitement. 

    Character/Execution: Reed crafts his characters with obvious care and attention to detail, while connecting some to well-known historical figures; the preface identifies that a handful of characters are based off his own family members. Despite the large cast, main players are easy to track; Wally stands out as a multilayered, intense protagonist, and his relationship with his traumatized aunt Martha is compelling—and disturbing—to watch. 

  • Fire on the Frontier

    by Kenneth Kunkel

    Rating: 7.00

    Plot/Idea: Fire on the Frontier is an immersive and layered work of historical fiction set in ancient Rome. With interwoven stories and multiple perspectives that draw from actual events, it can be challenging to keep track of all the narratives, but invested readers will be richly rewarded.

    Prose: Kunkel's prose style is clear, anchoring readers in the time and circumstances with detailed descriptions and an effective balance of action and dialogue.

    Originality: Fire on the Frontier captures the ancient era convincingly while maintaining forward momentum and careful plotting. 

    Character/Execution: While the multiple storylines can become unwieldy, Kunkel is a capable writer invested in the many characters, both male and female. Historical places and events are vibrantly portrayed and provided understandable context. 

  • A Kind of Hush

    by JoDee Neathery

    Rating: 7.00

    Plot/Idea: A Kind of Hush conveys the grief of a family’s tragic misfortune with great tenderness, but the forward momentum is blunted by a focus on day-to-day activities rather than forensic details pertinent to the novel's central mystery. When daughter Willa conveys a stunning revelation in a Wattpad story, the two prime suspects in the case quickly become red herrings, leaving readers with a sense of subtle disappointment over the time spent analyzing their involvement.

    Prose: Neathery's prose is highly readable, with ample time for the relationships between the characters to be understood and developed over the course of the story. Long passages of extraneous exposition detract from the tension, and side plots—like the interlude when Kurtz spends time with the Jones family while in hiding—sometimes slow the action.

    Originality: A Kind of Hush hosts a fascinating central mystery that will prove absorbing for readers. However, the work never seems to pin down its genre—missing details of the police investigation crucial to a mystery, while giving too much detail about people, places, and everyday activities which prevent a deeper emotional resonance one might expect in a family drama.

    Character/Execution: Characters are well rounded, and Neathery allows them plenty of time to interact and develop emotionally, though not always with fruitful results. The dialogue, used as a conduit to dispense details, sometimes leans toward an overly formal tone.

  • Wildcat: An Appalachian Romance

    by Jeffrey Dunn

    Rating: 7.00

    Plot/Idea: Wildcat: An Appalachian Romance is a richly rendered novel set in the titular region of the United States. It is not entirely clear to what romance the subtitle refers—the romance of the town of Wildcat, or the romance between the main character and former girlfriend, Carolyn. There's a case to be made that the lovingly crafted portrait of a small town experiencing a communal renaissance is the real love affair. 

    Prose: There are moments when the prose style works beautifully and the simplicity is elegant (when describing the communal nature of meals at Hotel Wildcat, the woodcrafts at the mill, beekeeping, and mushrooms).  At other times, the prose reaches too far to achieve lyricism. The overall effect of the storytelling makes the work feel like an immersive fairy tale.

    Originality: Wildcat is infused with atmosphere and charm, if not always forward thrust or tension. As a portrayal of a town decimated by catastrophic job loss and now experiencing a revival through communal living, art, and handcrafted products, there is an undeniable freshness and vitality in the concept. 

    Character/Execution: The author has an appealing storytelling style that will leave an impression on readers. However, the characters, relationships, and motivations depicted both in the recollections and in the present never quite tip into full portraits.

  • Time

    by Eric Hollister

    Rating: 7.00

    Plot/Idea: While struggling to comprehend his wife's terminal cancer and his vivid dreams/nightmares of his service in Iraq, watch repairman/maker Bob receives a very special watch in need of repair–a watch belonging to Death himself. Time is an entertaining read told with empathy, care, and attention to detail that does not become overly bogged down with unnecessary spirituality; nor does it strive to answer life's larger questions.

    Prose: Hollister's prose is easy to read and engaging, however, his brief forays into the intricacies of watch repair sometimes take away from the pace of the story. Additionally, the Iraq flashbacks are not as seamlessly integrated as they could be, and their purpose doesn't become evident until the very end of the book.

    Originality: A story about death, love, time, and spirituality is not wholly original–yet Hollister adds interest with a watchmaker playing a pivotal role in manipulating time itself: the "time" of people crossing over, the "time" keeping of the watch, the "time" it takes to say farewell to a loved one.

    Character/Execution: Bob is the heart of Time and his seemingly mundane daily routine gains depth through thoughtful character development. Mystical neighbor Angie is a nice addition, and serves as the only other character (besides a rather generic Death) to really interact with Bob.

  • The Mortal Link

    by Guillermo Arbe

    Rating: 6.75

    Plot/Idea: Readers may find themselves lost in the protagonist's thoughts throughout this harrowing story, but that is fitting for a novel centered around a character with such a traumatic and defining moment rooted in their past.  The plot is heart-wrenching, and moves slowly at times, but overall this is a stirring, expressive novel. 

    Prose: Arbe's tone is engaging, though the text feels information heavy in places. Given the novel's emotional premise, readers may find the prose too practical at times.

    Originality: Arbe lays human intricacies bare in this evocative novel, exposing the raw emotion of losing a loved one, the bond between parent and child, and the often fine line between vengeance and justice.

    Character/Execution: Arbe's characters are distinctly individual, though the protagonist's primary potential for growth plays out in his journey to seek revenge for his daughter's murder. The scenes detailing his profound grief at the loss of his daughter—and the subsequent changes wrought in his life—are both moving and painful to read.

  • Guardians of the Latte Stones

    by M.K. Aleja

    Rating: 6.50

    Plot/Idea: Guardians of the Latte Stones is an absorbing historical drama that delicately combines suspense, mystery, and the enduring horrors of the battlefield. The relationships between the central characters are carefully observed, acutely highlighting the plight of the Chamorro people of Guam and their often traumatic experiences during the Japanese occupation.

    Prose: Aleja's text is striking in its depiction of graphic imagery, expertly shining a light on the devastating effects of war. There are also affecting scenes of physical and emotional abuse, and Aleja's level atmospheric descriptions neatly draw readers into the narrative's complexities.

    Originality: Guardians of the Latte Stones is a consistently engaging and frequently intense war drama. It is a straightforward and well crafted tale that offers eye-opening insights into the experiences of the Chamorro people.

    Character/Execution: Guardians of the Latte Stones benefits from a strong sense of natural authenticity. Aleja displays a great understanding of human emotion in their character depictions, particularly through their depiction of Takeshi's intense struggle for survival.

    Blurb: A powerful and engaging World War II drama, with supernatural overtones.

  • An Unlikely Arrangement: Brides of Biltmore

    by Cindy Patterson

    Rating: 6.50

    Plot/Idea: Patterson crafts a refreshing historical romance with an entertaining lead in Abigail Dupree, an unconventional female in every way. The central idea—of a man protecting Abigail from further "ruin" by falling in love with her—is unique and appealing.

    Prose: The prose flows smoothly, transporting readers into the novel's time period through Patterson's elegant writing and eloquent dialogue.

    Originality: An Unlikely Arrangement follows standard romantic tropes, though Patterson infuses the novel with fresh spirit through her creative female protagonist.

    Character/Execution: Abigail, as well as the male romantic lead Garrett Barringer, are well-defined characters who effortlessly fit the genre. Readers will appreciate the easy, polished repartee between the two. 

  • Fall of the Mighty

    by Larry Forcey

    Rating: 6.25

    Plot/Idea: Fall of the Mighty takes place in the early 20th century, focusing on main character William Jennings's lonely upbringing, tempered by his passion for baseball, a hook that continually comforts, inspires, and motivates him throughout the novel. Forcey's love for sports is evident in this engrossing and compelling drama.

    Prose: Forcey's text blossoms under his loving attention to detail, enhancing atmosphere while also emphasizing his characters' authentic interactions. His writing of on-field sports activity is particularly impressive, and the letters shared between Eli and Jennings are beautifully touching.

    Originality: Fall of the Mighty is the second entry in Forcey's Diamonds through Waterloo series, where he transmits relationships, sports, and society in a thoroughly convincing manner. The final third of the book, where the crux of the story unfolds primarily through correspondence between Eli and Jennings, works particularly well.

    Character/Execution: Jennings embarks on a journey of discovery that is littered with painful losses and unexpected encounters. The sharp and naturalistic dialogue between he and Eli reveals a true emotional depth to their connection.

    Blurb: A brilliantly observed sports drama that plumbs life's unplanned encounters.

  • Pearly Whites!

    by David Goldstein

    Rating: 6.25

    Plot/Idea: Goldstein delivers a rollicking read centered on entrepreneurship and genetic engineering, as an heiress to a cannabis empire sets her sights on the struggling TeeGentics, a biotech company creating genetically engineered teeth. The plot is lighthearted, and readers will be entertained by the book's turns, though a handful of scenes stall out midstream. 

    Prose: The prose is straightforward and structurally sound, with instinctive dialogue that makes the interactions between characters feel spontaneous.

    Originality: Goldstein's combination of genetically engineered teeth with greedy corporate grabbing makes this plot line amusing and distinctive. 

    Character/Execution: Goldstein's characters are, for the most part, well-to-do and shallow, filling their days with excess of every kind. Readers may empathize more with Billy, the story's guinea pig for tooth experiments, whose implants cause him ongoing physical difficulties.

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